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How to deal with narcissist when taking holiday



NinaJoesuf25 36 / 61  
Nov 15, 2016   #1
Needless to say, having an enjoyable holiday is overwhelmingly appealing. However, it is enormously terrifying when we make a plan for this entertainment with such narcissistic personality people. How can we deal with this circumstances?. As such, this article explains just to make them become your friend. Subsequently, playing the contrary role is good notion when you get fruitless twattling. Another way is to trying to make them feel good with interesting question.

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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15393  
Nov 15, 2016   #2
Imanina, you are supposed to be writing a summary of the article. So why did you not include any of the important information from the article in the summary? There was no data regarding the percentage of people considered narcissistic, nor a breakdown of the 5 ways to deal with such a personality type while on vacation. The article clearly indicates the aforementioned data in both facts and figures, with some witty examples to boot. Why did you pass up on the chance to show the examiner that you know how to summarize an article by simply listing down the important keywords from it? You should have mentioned the information even if you could not provide a description for each. Right now, what you have is an opinion statement, not a summary of an article.
yurikeyuri 43 / 49  
Nov 16, 2016   #3
Hello, let me give my correction for you

Another way is to tryingtrybecause after infinitive is V1

I think this summary must add the data of percentage maybe or many reasons too that many people take the holiday
Dioba 68 / 97  
Nov 16, 2016   #4
Hi, let me give several suggestions for you. Correct me if i wrong.
1. you summary too short and insufficient number of essential information for the reader.
2. You need put an introduction paragraph to brainstorm the reader minds and add more than 1 paragraph to develop your ideas.
3. you should also gives several supporting sentence and example to make it stronger.
4.Another way is to trying to make them feel...---> to + V1/ bare infinitive


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