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The Design of a Wave-Energy Machine and Its Best Location


hirani03 36 / 50 5  
Aug 30, 2016   #1
The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparison where relevant.

There are two diagrams about the design of a wind turbine and it best position to put. The materials include blades which can be fiber glass or wood, wind sensor, generator, steel tower and computer to get the information from sensor adjust blades include direction and angle.

The first picture shows the process of wind turbine produce energy. The steel tower is located around the shoreline. In the top of the tower, it is existed blades. When the wind was flowed, it will be spin. It will produce energy to the generator. As the result, the electricity is gained 1.5 megawatts. Wind sensor then detects the speed and direction of wind and its information will send to the computer.

The wind turbine can be optimum in working when it is placed in the right position. According to the second diagram, the wind turbine will be worked optimum when it is placed in the high position around the sea. It can give twice output then the turbine which existed in the domestic turbine. The maximum wind is the most strength in the high level than in the sea or in the domestic turbine.



Ilmi_03 47 / 69 11  
Aug 30, 2016   #2
Hikuma, :)

... design of a wind turbine and the best position to put it .

The materials include blades which can be constructed from fiber glass or wood, (...) get the information from sensor adjust blades include direction and angle .

When the wind was flowed, it will be spinspun .

... and its information will sendbe sent to the computer.
ekalamarsyari11 72 / 108 9  
Aug 30, 2016   #3
There are two diagrams about the design of ... => you are supposed to use a paraphrase in introduction paragraph and make it little bit specific

this is my suggested introduction paragraph for you:
the diagrams illustrates two layouts from a wind turbine's design and the best place to construct it. The wind turbine has some important part including a blades, a wind sensor, a steel tower and a computer system.

The steel tower is located around the shoreline => i think it is better to cut down this part.

keep writing ;-)


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