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Details of the elecricity production on the basis of given diagrams



siddiqumar 15 / 8  
May 7, 2015   #1
The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.


The first diagram gives information regarding the construction of a wind turbine which consists of four fundamental components, and the second picture describes how the wind turbines work in the optimum locations. Overall, what stands out from the diagrams reveals that for producing electricity, all elements of a wind turbine must be totally operated. In stark contrast to this, the ideal location determines the quantity of energy. The higher the wind turbine is located, the bigger the electricity is produced.

With regard to the process of electricity produced, the way of a wind turbine operating is when the wind blows blades-fiberglass or wood, this automatically gets the blades to rotate. At the same time, the wind sensor will lead speed and direction, and it can be controlled by computer which is placed beside steel tower for adjusting direction and angle from blades. Then, finally the generator is able to produce 1.5 megawatts.

A closer look at the data shows that the tower can be constructed anywhere, on the hill, under the sea, or near domestic turbine. Maximum wind strengths will be obtained if the tower is built on the hill which means that more electricity will be generated. On the other hand, less electricity will be resulted when the tower is located under the sea even this mode does not disturb the landscape. Likewise, if the tower is placed at domestic area, a wind turbine is more likely to gain less wind strength by 100 kilowatts.


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justivy03 - / 2265  
May 7, 2015   #2
- Overall, what stands out from the diagrams reveals that for in producing electricity, all elements of a wind turbine must be totally operated.
- In stark contrast to this On the contrary, the ideal location determines the quantity of energy.
- With regard to the process of electricity produced, the way of a wind turbine operating operate is when...
- Then (delete as you said "finally", this already brings the end of the process), finally the generator is able to produce 1.5 megawatts.
- On the other hand, less electricity will be resulted produced when..
-Likewise, if the tower is placed at located in a domestic area,...

Siddi, your analysis is absolutely good, its precise, well constructed and facts are clearly stated. I would like to suggest though that you have to proof read your work before submission, mind your word usage and read more to enhance your vocabulary.

Cheers!!!


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