Task 1:
The diagram illustrates the changes in the surroundings of a small local museum between 1957 and 2007. The major difference is the architecture of the whole building, whereas some areas have remained unchanged. The structure of the building was renovated, and there are new functional rooms to serve the relatively different needs of visitors.
In the year 1957, the path leading to the main entrance was partly covered by different kinds of trees. The center was designed with four main components, which refer to a local history room, a museum storeroom, and a national history exhibition.
In 2007, the museum changed considerably, most notably in the size of the main center and its restructuring layout. It was enlarged with more functional areas, such as the reception and cafe, along with the local history room. On the other side of the main building, the museum shop was newly built to sell souvenirs and gifts. Behind the history room are the two functional rooms of the museum, namely the special exhibitions and education center. This upgrade is incredibly helpful in completing the museum.
Overall, it is clear that the rise in consumer demand and the need for better service provision have led to the renewal of this museum.
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4783 The task 1 essay is overwritten by 6 words. Remember that you have to complete the essay within 20 minutes. So you cannot write more than 200 words if you want to properly edit and revise the information at the same time. By the way, your comparison indicator is incorrect. You cannot refer to "between" in this statement because the image does not allow you to compare images from other years in the essay. You have only 2 years to compare and discuss. You will receive demerits due to the incorrect time frame construction and presentation in the summary overview section. Avoid deductions based on response requirements to preserve your overall high score.
