The diagram about how to get energy from geothermal power plants

Task 1 ; The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

SOME STEPS FROM GEOTHERMAL POWER PLANTS TO PRODUCE ENERGY

The figure shows the process of geothermal power plants to produce the electricity.

From the beginning, the component process of power plant are started from cold water in the tank. Then, in the below of the tank, there is a pipe around 4.5 km into the ground to pump down the water are going to the injection. After that, the cold water will go through geothermal area (hot stone) and it will become hot water. Next, Hot water will be pumped up to the condenser in the big container and the tool will accommodate the water to be hot air. Furthermore, the steam air is connected to the turbine this is because spinning the turbine to get electrical energy in the generator. After all, generator will send the electrical energy to the tower.

In conclusion, geothermal energy plant is used to create energy with some steps. Heating cold water by geothermal area and transferring the water to be air in the condenser container and also rotates the turbine to produce electricity in the generator.

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Yoga, while you did well in presenting more than 150 words in the essay, your formatting is off. You must present a 4 paragraph essay that details the geothermal power development. Divide the paragraph presentation into inter-related steps. That way you manage to create the required number of paragraphs. Make sure to present no less than 3 sentence per paragraph as well to make sure that you fall under the minimum sentence requirement, don't go over 5, which is the maximum sentence requirement per paragraph.

Your presentation is confusing as it does not totally follow the diagram presentation. You also did not use the parenthesis information in the appropriate spot so when you did introduce it in the discussion, the reader ends up wondering what the presentation is in relation to. Don't be cut and dried in the presentation of the steps. Try to include some obvious explanation references in order to deliver a more complete procedural report to the reader.

Thank you holt for your suggestion but should I put the conclusion for this essay type?