Discuss the question of death penalty in general- IETLS

Please give me some suggests to improve my writing skill :). Thank you. :D

"Why do we kill people to show that killing people is wrong?" As human, we all have a right to live, and if there is a course for that, only God know whether we should die or not. Therefore, I strongly oppose the appearance of death penalty in law of any country in the world.

Capital punishment has never deterred offenders in our society. It's highest action that aimed at punishing criminals due to their mistakes. However, It means that they only exchange their life to delete their offense. And I believe that they will not be afraid to repeat it. Because they know "death ends all". In addition, there are many reasons of their acts such as poor or revenge. Hence, government should find the ways to solve the inceptions, not the results that they caused.

The alternative- life without parole- will better for all parties very much. If death penalty is executed, what could we do? Gangsters will continue revenge the victims because the police cannot protect for their safety minute by minute. Wise Gandhi once said "an eye for an eye, the world is blind". Therefore, capital punishment is not the good way to piece our society. Besides, money saved from execution could go to victims to compensate partly for their losses, although it's only a bit little thing.

Last but not least, a derailed judgment can get many lives away. Frankly, justice still has humanity as well as his decides. In many cases, criminals have to die due to unpleasantness of justice. Moreover, It has one dangerous hidden power in which some persons take advantages of death penalty to do dirty things. The murders consciously use their power and money to kill innocent people without the look of society.

In short, Giving up capital punishment is right action that people totally agree. The alternative can help find the way out of many troubles such as revenge. It also avoid the problems that taking power and money to do bad things.

Make a note on this,
...and if there is a CAUSE for that, only THE God knowS whether we should die or not.

...punishment is not the IDEAL way to SAFE GUARD THE PEACE AND HARMONY IN our society.

The murderERs consciously use their power and money to kill innocent people without CONSIDERING THE VALUE OF HUMAN LIFE.

Your have a wide range of vocabulary.
Good luck.

Oh, with this sentence, I mean, if there are another justice. That is God. :D
Frankly, I also referred some documents on Internet to find out my ideas and vocabylaries. ^^
Thank you mhss very much. I'm very glad to reveive your suggests :D. It's very useful :D

... this sounds a bit confusing dear. Is this what you wanted to say;
Therefore I strongly oppose to having death penalty implemented.


It is the highest action that a legal system could perform in order to punish criminals who have committed crimes.


However, imposing the death penalty is like that one would exchange his own life in settlement of the offense he /she made.

Hi Dumi, 2 fixed sentences above are so useful to me. However, I have a trouble in the meaning of "in settlement of"


I think it's only used for money? :D.
If i replace this by "in charge of". Is this good ?
Thanks Dumi very much :D

Yep.... you are right. "Settlement" is generally used in situations where money is involved. But it is also used to mean settling other things too. For example, you can say;

In settlement of our disputes, he agreed to allow me to use his car.
In this case I used it thinking it would give a creative interpretation :P ... but seems it confuses people :D

I always search new phrasal Verb or Noun on Oxfordictionary site. And i came across the explaination of "in settlement of". Frankly, I'm not confuse when using it. :)). :P.:P