Happiness is considered important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important for achieving happiness?
It is not easy to describe what happiness is. IELTS essay topic.
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Happiness is considered important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important for achieving happiness?
Happiness is undoubtedly a pivotal aspect of human life, whilst, human beings have to struggle with the difficulty of achieving(attaining) it. Indeed, happiness is a very abstract notion(concept). This essay will first provide a rational explanation for why happiness is very difficult to define and then list several elements which are essential for being happy./55 words intro/
There is perhaps certain reason why happiness is difficult to define. Not surprisingly, it can be claimed that since different people with different outlooks have dissimilar understanding of what happiness is, its definition may vary from person to person. A businessman may consider a prosperous business as happiness, whereas, a blinded person can be delighted if he is able to see, for example. Definition of heppiness therefore remains a challenging issue. /71 words body1/
It is true that there are a number of factors that play a crucial role for achieving happiness. One important element is living in a peaceful and affluent country where you can have a high quality life. In fact, happiness rates tend to be higher in developed nations than in worse-off ones. Another influential factor is presumably a successful career with a well-paid position. There is no doubt that a good job helps a person find his place in society, meanwhile, an acceptable salary means that you can own a good accommodation and/or a prestigious automobile.
Albeit such factors as thriving career, living in a rich region and high living standards determine happiness, it still remains an indefinite term.
around 250 words
Happiness is undoubtedly a pivotal aspect of human life, whilst, human beings have to struggle with the difficulty of achieving(attaining) it. Indeed, happiness is a very abstract notion(concept). This essay will first provide a rational explanation for why happiness is very difficult to define and then list several elements which are essential for being happy./55 words intro/
There is perhaps certain reason why happiness is difficult to define. Not surprisingly, it can be claimed that since different people with different outlooks have dissimilar understanding of what happiness is, its definition may vary from person to person. A businessman may consider a prosperous business as happiness, whereas, a blinded person can be delighted if he is able to see, for example. Definition of heppiness therefore remains a challenging issue. /71 words body1/
It is true that there are a number of factors that play a crucial role for achieving happiness. One important element is living in a peaceful and affluent country where you can have a high quality life. In fact, happiness rates tend to be higher in developed nations than in worse-off ones. Another influential factor is presumably a successful career with a well-paid position. There is no doubt that a good job helps a person find his place in society, meanwhile, an acceptable salary means that you can own a good accommodation and/or a prestigious automobile.
Albeit such factors as thriving career, living in a rich region and high living standards determine happiness, it still remains an indefinite term.
around 250 words