What effects can advertisements have on consumers?

How Advertising Affects Consumers

Currently, advertising is all around us with positive and negative effects, especially on consumers. There are many positive effects of advertising on consumers. First, companies want to improve their sales, so they use advertising as a means of distributing their products. Advertisements give a lot of information about the products such as price, function and instruction. When consumers have all the essential information, they will make decisions to buy, which makes companies more expansive. Equally important is that advertisements with great visuals will appeal to customers, which satisfies their shopping desire. In addition, this will help boost the country's economy. On the other hand, advertisements also have negative effects. One issue is that advertisements use misleading strategies to encourage people to buy unnecessary products, which can also have quality. This always tends to create negative feelings because products do not meet their needs. Another issue is that advertisements can cause distraction to people from what they concentrate on. That can reduce their productivity and the quality of work. By and large, advertisements have pros and cons. It can help provide numerous useful information but can alsao bother us with bad things.

This essay requires several paragraph bodies to be considered fully developed and accurate in presentation. Your prompt representation is a single sentence, without any supporting arguments for the claim being made. There have to be at least 2 reasons. One for the positive and one for the negative. That way the succeeding paragraphs will have a foundation for its discussion.

A separate discussion should have been used for the positive effects. You could use up to 2 related positive/ negative reasons for advertising in individual paragraphs. One topic for the advertiser and one topic for the consumer presented in the same thread. Develop those positive / negative effects in a manner that shows the positive/negative relationship between advertising and the buyer, you should be able to do that in 5 sentences. Your positive / negative discussions only state reasons without any supporting statements for your claims. That makes the reasons appear to be without merit. If you do not develop a convincing explanation for the positive / negative arguments, then you are not informing or educating the reader in the proper manner.

If you wrote this essay for a Task 2 writing test, then you would have failed the exam overall. If you wrote this only as an English exercise, then you did well enough in expressing your English thoughts. However, you need to delve deeper into the discussion, even for a grammar exercise, to help you develop your English vocabulary and writing skills.