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[IELTS - Task 2] Examinations can give a clear picture of students' true ability



greenleaf 4 / 20  
Dec 9, 2013   #1
TOPIC:Only formal examinations, written or practical, can give a clear picture of students' true knowledge and ability at university level. Continuous assessment like course work and projects are poor measures of student ability. In what extent do you agree or disagree?

Formal examinations and continuous assessment like course work and projects are two methods of evaluating students' ability widely used in most educational systems. Some people are of the opinion that how well a student does in an examination is a clear reflection of his or her knowledge and ability, whereas course work and projects are not effective measures of students' capacity. Personally, I strongly agree with this point of view.

To begin with, it is undeniable that students' true ability can be accurately assessed through demanding examinations. Since students are not entitled to seek help from materials and other people when taking an examination, they must depend on their own knowledge in order to receive satisfactory marks. Hence, their true ability can be shown through their performace during examinations. Moreover, it should be noted that those who obtain excellent results in examinations are very likely to be successful in their future career. Accordingly, it is certain that examinations are truly an objective form of assessment in terms of students' wisdom and capacity.

On the other hand, I firmly believe that course work and projects cannot provide a true reflection on students' general ability, as plagiarism can spring from these methods. Unlike examinations, students are given permission to utilize textbooks and the Internet for research, which gives them opportunities to copy other people's ideas or even complete essays via easily accessible websites. Consequently, a mediocre student can achieve high scores straightforwardly, but these scores do not represent his or her true capability.

In conclusion, I want to reiterate that formal examinations are a much more effective way of evaluation than course work and projects. Thus, it is crucial that organizing examinations and improving their quality should be given more priority at colleges and universities.

dumi 1 / 6793  
Dec 10, 2013   #2
Formal examinations and continuous assessment like course work and projects are two methods of evaluating students' ability widely used in most educational systems.

Good idea for a hook... Wish some little changes in the arrangements of words;
Formal examinations and continuous assessments like course work and projects are two widely used methods for evaluating students' ability in many educational systems.
Good introduction :)
Overall, a very good essay.... If you managed time well, you can surely aim for a very good score, definitely above 28/30 :D ... Well, this is the first time I commented on anyone's scores more precisely. lol
mariali 3 / 9  
Dec 10, 2013   #3
Hence, their true ability can be shown through their performaceperformance during examinations.

...just one tiny mistake of spelling.
In general, you did it perfectly! :D Congrats! Try to hit 9.0! >"<
OP greenleaf 4 / 20  
Dec 10, 2013   #4
Thank you very much for always giving me helpful feedback :) I think I still have a lot to learn though ^^!

...just one tiny mistake of spelling.
In general, you did it perfectly! :D Congrats! Try to hit 9.0! >"<

Thank you, Trang :)
dumi 1 / 6793  
Dec 10, 2013   #5
You write very well greenleaf. I wish you become one of the contributors of this site. By helping others you too can keep improving your English writing skills. Also, you can help others with your experiences too. After all, helping others is an inspiring thing, isn't it? Please let me know if you are interested in becoming a contributor :)
OP greenleaf 4 / 20  
Dec 10, 2013   #6
It would be my great pleasure :) Although I am not an expert in writing, I will try my best to help other members with my experience. Thank you very much for offering me a chance to be a part of this wonderful forum :)
dumi 1 / 6793  
Dec 10, 2013   #7
That's good news! Please go to the EF Contributors page (you find it at the bottom - click on EF Contributors) and in that page come down to the point Be a Contributor (It's very quick and easy to apply!). There you get a link - send a message to us (click on that and send a message to EF telling us you like become a contributor) Please follow these steps for now!

Thank you very much! :)


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