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An extraordinary capacity of creativity can be obtained by having a willing to be wrong



nda18 46 / 60  
Oct 27, 2016   #1
TED sumary Do schools kill creativity? - Sir Ken Robinson

Creativity, recently, is as important in education as literacy. Every child has extraordinary capacity of creativity that can be obtained by having a will to be wrong. It does not mean that being wrong is the same thing as being creative. However, nearly all the schools, nowadays, teach the children how to be good at some subjects such as mathematics and science, not on art. This bears hierarchy in education systems and mainly because the education system was developed to fulfil job and industry demand. But, jobs now need not only high education or intelligence but also creativity.

Based on Ken, there are 3 things people know about intelligence. Firstly, intelligence is diverse, it means that people think in many different ways - in sound, movement, visually. The second is dynamic, intelligence is amazingly interactive. From the interactive brain, original idea comes and leads to the creativity. The third is distinct, it means that people have their own way to do some activities.

Ken recommends people to use their not only intelligences but also imaginations and creativities wisely to face uncertain problems in the future. People should rethink the fundamental principles in educating creativity to the children.

akbarmappiare 31 / 445  
Oct 27, 2016   #2
Hi Nurul.
These are my thoughts towards your summary. Hopefully, these can help you to finalize yours


Every child has AN extraordinary capacity (...) by having a willING to be wrong.
... system was developed to fulfilL A job and industry demand. But HOWEVER, THE jobs now need not (...) but also THE creativity.

Firstly, THE intelligence is diverse, (...) many different ways - SUCH AS in sound, movement, AND visually. The second is dynamic, STATING THAT intelligence ...
The third is distinct, it means MEANING (I conduct reducing here) that people have ...

... to use their not only THE intelligences but also THE imaginations and ...
... principles in educating THE creativity to the children.

Note:
Actually, your summary is a good job because readers can get the points. However, you still improve your skill for writing. Please, you learn about linking words, reducing, and omitting.

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