"My Father" - Teachers day

On this Teachers day I want to thank my father who is not with us but his blessing are always with us . he is watching from there and see our progress and happiness .

I can say proudly whatever today I'am just because of him. he was a great man with principal and dignity. he was my first mentor he always taught how to be a good person because that is very important. Make someone smile Be polite, friendly and treat people well, regardless of who they are or their position in life. I remember he always gave us best in our life. Never stopped or doing any thing always stood beside us and gave freedom to take decission in our life.

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- Is your father dead? You need to clarify that point. Why is he no longer with your family?
- ... his blessings ...


- He is watching from afar and can see our progress and happiness.


- ... whatever I am today is because...


- He was a great man of principle and dignity.


- He was my first mentor and he taught me that it was very important to be a good person.


- Make someone smile, be polite, friendly, and treat people well. Regardless of who they are or their position in life.

I rememberhe always gave us best in our life .

- I remember how he always gave us the best in life .


- He never stopped supporting us and always stood by our side, giving us the freedom to make decisions in our lives.

I hope my corrections help you in some way :-)

Thank you so much after your correction give me confidence actually my medium of study was other language and now I am struggling with my kids sometime I feel helpless because I cauldnt help them. I will be very greatfull if you guide me. I want to write my emotions and thoughts in Engilsh but no one is for guiding.

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