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Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmental



chonhocielts 1 / -  
Sep 20, 2024   #1
Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

It is an issue of controversy whether several dishes are delivered from far away, while a group of individuals believed that indigenous food is conducive more to nature and beneficial to the economy. Although, considering aspects together, I hold a firm belief that the benefits outshine the detriments.

On the one hand, consumption of only native foods can exert negative impacts on the economy. To begin with, eating domestic foods instead of products that have been imported from overseas could pose a threat to the exported-imported food industry. Nevertheless, many companies transporting dishes over the globe may be restricted. As a result, the distribution of those companies could be limited in terms of economic aspects. Moreover, using native ingredients could pose a challenge to the diversity of people's diet because of the difference in climate and topography, local production can not supply all the necessary nutrients. As a consequence, paucity of crucial products may give rise to poor inhabitants' constitution.

On the other hand, eating only local foods may exert positive impacts on environmental aspects and economical viewing. First and foremost, foods that have been produced domestically are consumed to lower the demand of food transported over the world. As a result, a significant amount of CO2 has been cut down. In addition to this, vehicles must burn fossil fuel to move, so that the restriction of food transported will assist to cool down the run out of nonrenewable sources. In this aspect of the economy, inhabitants eating local food will create job opportunities for residents. For instance, farmers could sell more farming products which can help them to earn a stabilized salary. As a result, the living standard of inhabitants would be enhanced.

To sum with, although consumption native food could bring several drawbacks such as the restriction in financial distribution and poor inhabitant's constitution, eating only domestic dishes also open up opportunities for cooling down the run out of sources which can not be regenerated and leveled up residents' living standard.

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Sep 21, 2024   #2
It is an issue of controversy

There is no issue of controversy being presented in the original prompt. The examiner will deduct points for exaggerated statements that alter the original sentiment or emotions of the discussion topic. This was only an idea that was presented. It should be presented as an idea in the restatement, in a calm and logical, rather than in an argumentative manner.

I hold a firm belief that the benefits outshine the detriments.

This is the basis of your reasoning paragraphs. As such, this is the singular opinion that you are required to show as correct in the 2 reasoning paragraphs. You can use the current discussion format you have for the reasoning paragraphs. Only the opinion that supports your given point of view will receive scoring consideration. The essay will then receive a non passing score due to the under development of your idea. The unsupported reason will not be given any scoring credentials.


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