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The funding - Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features



nateq136 2 / 3  
Aug 9, 2024   #1
The table presents the funding provided from some sources from 2017 to 2018. The charts show the proportions of funding spent on several fields in the same period.

Overall, the police budget showed an increase in all providing sources, while the national government source contributed over half of the total budget. In terms of money distribution in different fields, the proportion of salaries for staff and officers dominated, whereas the funding for technology still took the least investment

In 2017, the majority of the budget, amounting to 175.5 million, was contributed by the national government. This amount increased steadily to 177.8 million in 2018. Similarly, local taxes provided 91.2 million in 2017, and this figure rose significantly to 102.3 million in 2018, marking the largest growth among all sources. Funding from other sources, such as grants, experienced a slight increase from 38 million in 2018 to 38.5 million in 2018

Regarding the distribution of the budget across different fields, the percentage of salaries for staff and officers remained highest at 75% in 2017, despite a slight decrease of about 6% in 2018. The funding for technology increased by about 6% from 8% in 2017 to 14% in 2018. However, the proportion of funding for buildings and transport remained the same in both 2017 and 2018 at 17%


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15347  
Aug 11, 2024   #2
The charts show t

In this case, being number specific would help since each pie chart references a different information presentation. You are also referencing 2 different data presentations in your overview so you have to be clear about the number of pie chart images that were presented for review. This will help increase your GRA score.

Overall,

Again, for clarity purposes, you should mention the different trends as attributed to the image reference. This particular paragraph will not get a passing mark in the preliminary GRA scoring section because it leaves the reader confused and wondering about where these data came from with regards to image references.

Your main problem will be in the GRA and C+C sections because your references are not indicative of the source images. Always open the paragraph with an image reference so that the reader will know where the information is coming from, helping them to create a clear mental picture in reference to the discussion presentation.


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