Getting better life with English mania

Mania can be good, alarmingly, and unfortunately deadly. Needless to say, there is a novel kind of mania in the word, learning English. Surprisingly, 2 billion people eager to learn English with the largest proportion comes to China. The reason why is crucial to learn this linguistic science is because we can get better life through this language such as obtaining a job and also enrolling favorite school. With studying English, we can discuss regarding hunger, poverty and disease with a vast range of people in the world.

hi these are my thought towards your summary

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... to learn English withand the largest proportion ...
The reason why it is crucial to learn (...) we can get a better life ...

thank you and good luck

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In English we can discuss ...

Hi Nina, below are my thoughts on your essay.

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There you have it Nina, I hope the above remarks are helpful to your revision and though this essay might be short, it suffice the idea that is asked of you to write.