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Recently, the world has new kinds of mania, mania for learning new languages, especially English


nda18 46 / 81 9  
Nov 15, 2016   #1
TED Summary : English Manias

Being manias somehow can be good, alarmingly and even can be deathly. Recently, the world has new kinds of mania, mania for learning new languages, especially English. There are billions people learning English worldwide such India, Southeast Asia, and China - the largest English speaking country. English is consider to be a single opportunity for better life and jobs, and even to get a better food served in the table. Like mathematics and music, English is a language to solve problem and with English, people can have a comfortable conversation about global problems. English also represents hope for a better future where the world has a common language to solve its common problems.

Source : TED.com
ichanpants89 [Contributor] 16 / 777 309  
Nov 15, 2016   #2
Hi Nda,
Among thousands of TED Talks videos, why did most of the members here choose this video? Is it an obligation or something? However, these are my remarks anyway. Hopefully, it would be helpful.

- ..., alarmingly and even can be deathlydeadly . (remember the rule of parallel nouns/verbs/adverbs/adjectives)
- There are billions of people wholearninglearn English worldwide (...), and China, (comma) the largest ...
- English is considered to be an singleessential language to look for opportunity for better life, and jobs, and even...
- English also represents a hope for a (...) the world has a commonshared/universal language to solve...

Hope this helps :)


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