A girl who decides to stand up for what is right - Antigone essay

I need help on my Antigone essay, it's over wether or not she was a hero and i need another reason on why she is a hero, Also i need help on writing a conclusion paragraph, please help, this is what i have so far

Antigone is a story by Sophocles about a girl who decides to stand up for what is right even when she knows it is against the law. Many people argue if Antigone is a hero or not. This essay is all about the reasons she is a hero.

I think Antigone is a hero because she is not afraid to stand up for what is right. "He has no part in keeping from me what is mine."(Sophocles)

She says this to Ismene after hearing that Creon has banned the burial of their brother, Polyneices. "You can make excuses, but I shall go, heap up a mound for a most philos brother."(Sophocles) She is going to bury her brother even though it is against the law. If she were not a hero she would not have buried her.

Another way Antigone is a hero is that she is not afraid of the consequences, "No, justice will not allow this since you were not willing to do this, and I did not act in common with you."(Sophocles) She says this when Ismene asks Creon to split the punishment between them even though she did not commit the crime. "You, do not die a common death with me. What you did not touch, do try to make your own. I will be enough by dying, I myself."(Sophocles) She is saying this to Ismene to tell her that even though she is going to die that she should not die the same way she did. If she were not a hero she would worry about the consequences.

Please help this is due on the 5th and i have english 1st period

Antigone,is a story by Sophocles, is about a girl who decides to stand up for what is right even when she knows it is against the law.

Many people argue if Antigone is a hero or not. - "Many people argue whether or not..."

"He has no part in keeping from me what is mine."(Sophocles) - Shouldn't you be quoting Antigone because she said it...and add the lines.

If she were not a hero she would not have buried her.him.

She is saying this to Ismene to tell her that even though she is going to die that she should not die the same way she did. - This story is very wordy. I get lost in it. Reword and cut some words out.

-Stand up for what is right.
-Unafraid of the consequences.

When I studied Antigone, I didn't define her as a epic hero because in a way, she wasn't as modest. She is more of a main character in Antigone.

But she did die a tragic death.
Which can be another "epic hero" quality.

Good luck!

Many people argue if about whether or not Antigone is a hero. This essay is all about the reasons she is a hero, which include her _______, her decision to ________, and the fact that she __________.

Above, that will make it a sharp, well-defined thesis statement.

In the conclusion paragraph, repeat those ideas you expressed in the thesis sentence.

Ah! I see it was already due. I'm sorry I did not help in time. Good thing Jennifer was here...