globalization as it relates to politics & the society in small and developing society

as governance structure arre establisheb at a global level to deal with the growing global problems. conflicts have emerge as to how to make international organization morre accountable and democratic. stoker argues that the process of globalization are so powerful that they are sweeping aways nations and making the democratic embedded within them irrelevant. according to extreme versonof globalization theory, government no longer has the power to to control their owneconomies and the global market and tranational companies have more power than nationstate

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Governance structures are established at a global level to deal with the growing global problems. Along with this conflicts have emerged about how to make international organization more accountable and democratic. Stoker argues that the process of globalization is so powerful that they it is sweeping away nations and making the democratic embedded within them irrelevant. According to an extreme version of globalization theory, government has no longer the power to control its own economies and the global market as well as transnational companies have more power than a national state.

Start with a capital letter:
As governance structures are established at a global level to deal with the growing global problems. conflicts have emerged as to how to make international organizations more accountable and democratic.

Capitalize the first letter of a sentence:
Stoker argues that the process of globalization are is so powerful that they are sweeping away it is sweeping away nations and making the democratic characteristics embedded within them irrelevant.

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