Do you agree or disagree with this sentence: People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.
In modern world, people deal with many issues which intense anxiety and stress in their life in caparison to the past and it is natural reaction that increase the tendency of people toward personal enjoyment. Therefore I agree with this subject that today people spend too much time on personal enjoyment. But enjoyment has a different meaning for different persons and it depends on the condition of them. In the following I explain my reasons with examples.
First, consider a person who work in a company and he has to spend much time in front of computer in order to do his job. For this person going to gym or rest breaks between working times can be a personal-enjoyment. This kind of enjoyment is very helpful to human health and promotes the efficiency of person because sitting in front of computer for a longtime without any activity has negative effects on human's health.
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In modern world, people deal with many issues which intense anxiety and stress in their life in caparison to the past and it is natural reaction that increase the tendency of people toward personal enjoyment. Therefore I agree with this subject that today people spend too much time on personal enjoyment. But enjoyment has a different meaning for different persons and it depends on the condition of them. In the following I explain my reasons with examples.
First, consider a person who work in a company and he has to spend much time in front of computer in order to do his job. For this person going to gym or rest breaks between working times can be a personal-enjoyment. This kind of enjoyment is very helpful to human health and promotes the efficiency of person because sitting in front of computer for a longtime without any activity has negative effects on human's health.
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