(ielts graph) The computer and internet use per 1000 inhabitants in the Arab word.

christyj 5 / 15

Feb 28, 2013 #1

Write a report describing the information in the graph below.
- You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart gives information about the computer and internet use per 1000 inhabitants in the Arab word.

To begin with, there were same number of people per thousand use computer and internet in Egypt and Morocco which are 20 in both categories. There is only a negligible difference between the computer and internet users in Jordan and Oman.

In Saudi Arabia, the computer users are three times more than that of internet users which are 60 and 20 per thousand users. Syria also followed the same trend with 20 and 5 users per thousand in both categories. In UAE, there is a remarkable difference in the number of users between computer and internet. Computer users 160, are only less than half of the internet users 345 per thousand users. In Kuwait and Lebanon, there were marginal differences between the two groups that are only 30 per thousand.

In summary, the popularity of the computers are higher than that of the internet users in Kuwait and Saudi Arabia, whereas it UAE, Lebanon, Jordan and Oman had been showed an opposite trend of popularity of the Internet.

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dumi 1 / 6795

Feb 28, 2013 #2

~~To begin with,~~ there were same number of people per thousand use computer and internet in Egypt and Morocco which are 20 in both categories.

This should sound like a report on information revealed by the charts. So you need to have a tone of reporting something. Also you must first give the details of most obvious observations such as an overall view. This is what I suggest;

Overall the UAE records the highest number of inhabitants that use both computer and the internet in the Arab world. Egypt and Morocco the countries tha have the least number of people using computers while Syria records the lowerst number of people using the Internet. The only three countries that has people using the Internet more than computers are the UAE, Lebenan and Oman.

mhss 18 / 53

Feb 28, 2013 #3

Hi,
It is better to mention the type of the graph ..bar,pie,line...
It is expected to be sound nice rather than just figures.
Word USE can substitude with LOGGING TO THE INTERNET, ACCESS TO THE INTERNET, COMPUTER OWNERSHIP etc.

WEB,CYBER SPACE can be used as synonyms to internet.

Regards,
mhss.