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The graph shows the value in US dollars (in millions of dollars) of investment in funds of four cate



HieuLeMU 1 / -  
Jul 31, 2023   #1

The line graph analysis



The line graph illustrates the bond fund in the US dollars of property, gold, fine art and company shares between 1988 and 2014.

Overall, all four types of assets witnessed an upward in their value in the given period. Furthermore, the highest considerable valuable was gold with an increase significantly.

In 1988, gold was the most possession with 100 million dollars, followed by fine art at 75 million USD and finally property and company shares at approximately 50 million US dollars. In the next 18 years, there were some fluctuations in all four categories. Fine art had a considerable variation by rose slightly to 100 million dollar investment, then company shares with dramatically grew to just over 200 million USD. Although the value of gold was much more substantial than property, at just 190 and 90 million respectively, these assets had several patterns between 1998 and 2014.

In the last 8 years in the given chart, gold and fine arts witnessed a significant growth in the bond fund, at doubled and under three and a half times. Company shares climbed marginally to exactly 250 million dollars in investment and property saw a slight increase by 50 million USD.


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15460  
Aug 7, 2023   #2
I cannot properly review the task 1 report that you provided because the image that you provided is incorrect. It would have been better if you had not uploaded an image rather than uploading the wrong image, which makes it difficult for me to assess your work. Imagine if you had done this during an actual test. The result would be a failing score because your report will not be aligned with the image provided. That is an automatic failing score. Doing the same thing during the practice run just means your essay cannot be reviewed. Not much of an effect except you have to rewrite the paper. Do not make the same mistake during the actual test.


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