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"great feeling of cooking" - Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare.


saruul2004 2 / 4  
Mar 4, 2010   #1
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Preparing food has become more easier than the past. I am convinced that our life has been ameliorated by this change. In the following paragraphs, I will explain some my reasons to support my answer.

First of all, in thesedays people can spend no much of their time for cooking with the help of modern technologies, such as macrowave, stove. In old times we spent most of our time for cooking and preparing. Apart from these new technologies, in nowadays, ready-to-eat food plays an important role in food markets. It is very useful for someone who is often busy in everydays and it takes from he or she about 1-2 minutes, also it became more portable to carry to everywhere even we can use it while we are driving. So, we can use most of our time for other useful and useless things, such as educating, relaxing and reading interesting books.

Secondly, we thought that delicious food was made by only chef and we went to restaurants so that we taste some delicious food in the past. But, in my opinion, nowadays it is completely altered and toothsome food ingredients are become free to everyone. Everybody can cook any meals in their home using helpful books and the Internet source. I think that it gives people great feeling when they make meal for themselves.

Thirdly, ...

To sum it up, ...

Hello all,
I don't have any idea what I have to include in thirdly paragraph.
If is possible for you, please give me some ideas about thirdly paragraph.
Moonshadow0302 - / 68  
Mar 4, 2010   #2
I am sorry but I have to say that you write very bad English. You will need to get some help re-writing this essay as it has toooo many grammatical mistakes. I thought I would re-write the essay for you but it would take too much time to correct all the mistakes.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Mar 5, 2010   #3
You will need to get some help re-writing this essay as it has toooo many grammatical mistakes.

That's what we're here for! Sometimes maybe you just want to correct a few of the mistakes, and then someone else will correct a few more:

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Preparing food has become more easier than the past.

First of all, in modern times people do not have to spend much of their time cooking, because they have the help of modern technologies, such as microwave, stove, and so forth.

In old times we spent most of our time for cooking and preparing. Apart from these new technologies, in nowadays, ready-to-eat food plays an important role in food markets. It is very useful for someone who is often busy in everydays and it takes from he or she requires only about 1-2 minutes. Also, food products have become more portable to carry to everywhere; we can even use it while we are driving.

In order to write a conclusion paragraph, think of what your main idea is for this essay. Can you make the argument you want to make in this last paragraph? Try to write the last paragraph all about the message you want the reader to remember.


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