high school entrance exam - the most difficult time in your life

Whenever I think of all those times in my life when I faced important problems or events, I often remember that one time I studied for my high school entrance exam. I think it was challenging period for me because I had to practice frequently and face pressure from my parents and teachers. However, thanks to all my efforts, I secured the opportunity to study at my dream school.

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