The incredible trips of Bird Migration

According to passage, migration is commonly movement of animal from breeding ground during of the year. Like other animals Bird--for example--migration has typically unique at the centuries. Birds do migration has responded to the biological imperative of species to survive. The most of birds migration take place between the lower and higher latitudes of the Northern Hemisphere during of the year. Then, Birds breeding area in higher elevations, near or the peak mountains or other nearby low country. In summary, during migration, most birds fly for a limited period each day. Approximately amount six to eighth hours, typically flying distance of a hundred miles. At the start of its trip, around a half percent of its body-weight made up of the fat necessary to fuel this incredible travel.

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At the third sentence, you write "Birds do migration has responded to............." I think it could be replace with "Birds do migration as responded to........." to make sense with your summary. And also at the fourth sentence, you write "The most of birds migration take place............" it could be replace to make your summarize more colorful.

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Hi Mr. Patta.
These are my suggestions for your summary.

According to A passage, migration is commonly movement ...
THE Birds WHICH do migration has HAVE responded to the biological ...
The most of birds' migration take place ...
Approximately amount six to eighth EIGHT hours

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