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How Industrial Design is important to society



masamuneshirow2 2 / 1  
Apr 14, 2008   #1
I have posted this few times already but have been deleted without any explanations, I really would like some feedbacks and help on this essay.

Thank you!

Though majority of people unfamiliar with Industrial Design may misconceive it merely as a profession for drawing pretty pictures, putting candy wrappers over the products, however our job is to create solutions to everyday problems. Without the existence of Industrial Design Curriculum, the products that we are able to buy today would be more expensive and people would be living in a much worse environment.

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OP masamuneshirow2 2 / 1  
Apr 14, 2008   #2
Sorry about posting it so many times. I'm in desperate need of getting this essay done by tomorrow. I gotta turn in my portfolio and a 300 to 500 word essay about "How Design is important to society". this is the most important part of my program since if I don't get in the Upper Division program, I will have to wait another year.

Sorry again. and I appreciate it if you can help me to make this essay better
EF_Team2 1 / 1703  
Apr 15, 2008   #3
Greetings!

We try to answer posts within 24 hours, but can't always do so immediately. I hope this reaches you in time; I've made some corrections to your very good essay:

Though a majority of people unfamiliar with Industrial Design may misconceive it merely as a profession for drawing pretty pictures, putting candy wrappers over the products, our real job is to create solutions to everyday problems. Without the existence of Industrial Design Curriculum, the products that we are able to buy today would be more expensive and people would be living in a much worse environment.

I think the study of Industrial Design is intended to provide its service to the people of the general class. [Not sure what this means; maybe "to people of all walks of life" or even "the middle class" would be better?]

One of the most important aspects of industrial design is to provide good merchandise and reasonable prices in contrast to those of the past when the products mostly served the normal class. [There is no "normal" class. Not sure what this meant.]

There are numbers of homeless and starving, lack of services for the disabled, decreasing frequency of communication and socializing within communities, and limited access to health care.

However, one of the goals of Industrial Design is to not only offer the knowledge and awareness of design luxury goods, but also provide quality the goods for the weaker groups, such as the elderly, youths, homeless and physically disabled people.

Thus, Industrial Design helps in balancing out the social classes among our society and eliminating as much of the social problems.
One of the most devastating problems we are facing today is global warming. The cause of global warming can be described by our mistakes but most importantly our failure to realize this crucial responsibility, especially as the developing world places an increasing burden on the earth's resources.

However, as Designers, we can set an example by correcting our mistakes and hoping that others follow.
Thoughtful product designs can slow environmental degradation, decrease human illness and improve social conditions.
Industrial design lets us realize what we have done wrong and see it in the environmental degradation that surrounds us.
Therefore I believe our profession plays a crucial role in shaping the world into a better place to live.

Best of luck!

Thanks,

Sarah, EssayForum.com


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