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Information from testing and market stages is the input for design process of goods manufacturing



nida26 30 / 19  
Mar 27, 2016   #1
The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.

The flow chart illustrates the different stages of manufacturing of the consumer goods. Overall, it can be seen that the consumer goods manufacturing consists of several process and several information which is used as input for earlier stages to make adjustment.

To begin, raw materials and manufactured components are stored together in storage places. Afterwards, the result are become the input for production planning process. On the other hand, product research is also designed. The designed products are used in product planning stage. Then, this planned product will be processed in several next stages sequentially which are assembly, inspection, testing, and packaging.

Feedback from testing and market stages will be the input to design process. Then, the result of market research is also used in packaging and advertising phases. The next step is dispatch process, and sale is the last stage in manufacturing of goods. Feedback from sales phase is processed in market research.

justivy03 - / 2265  
Mar 28, 2016   #2
HI Nida, I believe this is just a post glitch when you forgot to include the diagram in your analysis, just be careful on your future articles.

Now, going back to your analysis, let me try to help you out by sharing what I think needs some corrections;

- manufacturing of the consumer goods.
- processes and several

- To begin with ,
- together in a storage places .
- result are become the input forthe outcome are added to the production planning process.

- the inputadded to the design process.
- used in the packaging and advertising phases .
- The next step is the dispatch process,
- and saleselling the product is the last
- Feedback from sales phase is processed in market research.I believe this last sentence is not necessary as we have added the same idea in the beginning.

Now, Nida, this corrections are just based on grammar and proper sentence construction as I am not able to analyze the diagram, this is why it is really important to add the diagram in your analysis.

I hope this is useful.


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