Would I be able to pass the toefl (24/30) writting section with such essay???
Topic is: If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed?
My essay is:
In today's era global warming is the most difficult problem in front of the whole world.If I were be the scientist, I would have invented such an equipment by which we can detect the shortcoming of any event which can be hazardous for our environment. So any equipment which can tell beforehand that certain event can be dangerous for our enviornment and by that we can stop it and prevent further damage to the atmosphere. By this invention the entire humanity will be benefited.
Now a day, more and more people are using automobiles and fumes out of chemical factories first of all directly affect the human health. They also damage ozone layer which can protect us from harmful ultra violet rays. Deforestation has also added to the problem. There are serious attacks from all the sides on the nature. Our successors will be in grave problem because there will be more and more natural calamities. Global warming has created threat not only for some endangered species but for all the living beings. There are temperature variations in all the seasons in every part of the world. For example, there are lot of island being formed out of glaciers as a result of high temperature.
This problem needs a quick and effective solution. I think we need such an instrument which can help us by warning us prior that certain event is dangerous for the environment. So that we can stop such activities before hand and further damage to the earth's ambience can be prevented. For example, if we had a machine which could had told our ancestors that deforestation may lead to such problemes ; or they might had known the effect of pollution on ozone layer;or the effect construction of dams on the enviorment on future generation, they would have not done that. By inventing such an instrument I would be able at least delay the natural disasters in coming future.
In the conclusion I will say invention of such a machine which can detect that particular event can alter the balance in the atmosphere can save present as well as the future of humanity. I think it is duty of every human to contribute towards his/her atmosphere. If I could get a chance I would love to protect my surrounding in every possible way.
Topic is: If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed?
My essay is:
In today's era global warming is the most difficult problem in front of the whole world.If I were be the scientist, I would have invented such an equipment by which we can detect the shortcoming of any event which can be hazardous for our environment. So any equipment which can tell beforehand that certain event can be dangerous for our enviornment and by that we can stop it and prevent further damage to the atmosphere. By this invention the entire humanity will be benefited.
Now a day, more and more people are using automobiles and fumes out of chemical factories first of all directly affect the human health. They also damage ozone layer which can protect us from harmful ultra violet rays. Deforestation has also added to the problem. There are serious attacks from all the sides on the nature. Our successors will be in grave problem because there will be more and more natural calamities. Global warming has created threat not only for some endangered species but for all the living beings. There are temperature variations in all the seasons in every part of the world. For example, there are lot of island being formed out of glaciers as a result of high temperature.
This problem needs a quick and effective solution. I think we need such an instrument which can help us by warning us prior that certain event is dangerous for the environment. So that we can stop such activities before hand and further damage to the earth's ambience can be prevented. For example, if we had a machine which could had told our ancestors that deforestation may lead to such problemes ; or they might had known the effect of pollution on ozone layer;or the effect construction of dams on the enviorment on future generation, they would have not done that. By inventing such an instrument I would be able at least delay the natural disasters in coming future.
In the conclusion I will say invention of such a machine which can detect that particular event can alter the balance in the atmosphere can save present as well as the future of humanity. I think it is duty of every human to contribute towards his/her atmosphere. If I could get a chance I would love to protect my surrounding in every possible way.