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Should the jury be given pastfacts of the defendant or not?



Linh Nguyen 1 / 1  
Jul 20, 2012   #1
It's the first time that i post my essay on this forum. So, thanks a lot for your help! Linh Nguyen :D

Final judgements made by the jury is known as a complex interplay of many factors. Recently, it has been a debatable issue whether the jury should be given any pastfacts of the defendant before reaching ultimate decision or not. However, this essay will highlight 2 main points covering the approval of these regulation.

First off, being provided with the defendant's past criminal record allows the jury to comprehend the crime motivation so as to have an appropriate deterrent. In fact, if the accused has previous sentence, it is highly likely that those criminal records have a sort of connection with the current one in terms of guilty motive and form of crime. It is actually regarded as a key factor in determining the investigating direction and sentence process. In addition, blank or in contrast, full pastfacts can make known different "seriousness rate" of the defendant's offences. Accordingly, well-founded measures will be made as a sharp deterrent, with light or heavy pelnaties respectively.

Secondly, having a thorough grasp of the suspect's past sentence, members of the jury will easily interrogate their defendant during the trial. Holding the most critical point, these jury are able to put thorny questions which can disorientate defendant and force them to tell the truth. Even if it is not their own fault, it is also with ease for the jury to realize whether it is other person's conspiracy or not. By this way, because all soft spots have been already caught, any insincere testimony from the defendant will be known and their denial will be made inefficient.

To sum up, pastfacts should be considered as a useful referrence with which a final judgement can be made from the jury. Having those important documentary, hence, the jury will stand a greater chance of giving a right sentence towards any guilty person standing in front of the dock

joshuanderitu01 2 / 40  
Jul 22, 2012   #2
You need to check on the nouns and pronouns of words, and as well
the right word for what you intend to mean .I have found a different meaning for your words.
your topic is a good one and you have explained well in paragraphs.
OP Linh Nguyen 1 / 1  
Jul 22, 2012   #3
thanks a lot for ur feedback, Joshua nderitu!!!
But can u help me to check this one, plz?
* 1stly, I think "thorny question" is a good phrase. So, is there any misunderstanding here when u changed it into "directive question"? :((

* 2ndly, I guess the word "measure" that I used has a different meaning with the word "evidence" that you considered.
Anyway, thank you for ur helpful feedback, Joshua nderitu!! :D


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