I would appreciate some help with my descriptive paragraph.
Mandy was my beautiful black and grey shitsu dog. She walked gracefully and barked quite fearlessly. Whenever she had the chance, she would spend most of her time outdoors chasing colourful butterflies and rolling around in the grass. Mandy was quite finicky when it came to visitors and the food she ate. I came to notice that she befriended people with a more calm personality and thoes who seem to be charming dog lovers. Others she would get uncontrollable furious at, and would go back and forth barking and growling. as for food she rather to have her pedigree mixed with sausage and egg, not exactly what a dog should be fed. Unlike most dogs Mandy enjoys taking baths, getting her hair blow dried and being powdered with flea control.
Mandy was my beautiful black and grey shitsu dog. She walked gracefully and barked quite fearlessly. Whenever she had the chance, she would spend most of her time outdoors chasing colourful butterflies and rolling around in the grass. Mandy was quite finicky when it came to visitors and the food she ate. I came to notice that she befriended people with a more calm personality and thoes who seem to be charming dog lovers. Others she would get uncontrollable furious at, and would go back and forth barking and growling. as for food she rather to have her pedigree mixed with sausage and egg, not exactly what a dog should be fed. Unlike most dogs Mandy enjoys taking baths, getting her hair blow dried and being powdered with flea control.