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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned development site

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Sep 7, 2023   #1

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustration display an industrial region in the town of Norbiton with the subsequent idea for the site.

Overall, the maps have a river which divide Farmland in the north from the mechanical area. In the future, the area will be completely converted to a residential.

All of the factories will be changed to houses. The size of Farmland in the outlook will reduced to one-half compared to initially. River has also been cut over by a road , which has a house at the end, to separate it in to two parts. A little track will be expanded to the northwest from the roundabout in the center.

Utility areas are going to be constructed around the accommodation. Playground and school will be placed to the east of the region whilst shops and hospital located in the center. A small roundabout will be built to the south of the big one in the middle.

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Sep 24, 2023   #2
While you have met the minimum word count for the report, I would not say that you will be receiving a high score for writing only 4 words over the word requirement. When you do not write at least 175 words, the tendency of your presentation is to be more prone to a lower score, or a failing score because you will be receiving point deductions in some aspects of the grading rubic. In this case, you will receive deductions in the GRA score since you have mostly grammar related problems in your presentation. While you do show an understanding of the image and your writing is somewhat clear, the lack of proper sentence structure will result in a failing score for your essay.

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