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Essay on Mark Twain and his writing style



tompolly 1 / -  
Apr 26, 2011   #1
So I got my essay due tomorrrow, and i really want to do another last check to be sure of my writing does it sounds right? does it make sense, can i have some feed back?. I know my English is bad, because i'm an asian, but please ignore the fact that im asian and please help mee ;) thanksss if you can helpp mee ii really appreciate itt

ESSAY:

If you're the type of person that loves to read. Then you would probably won't miss out beautiful piece of literature like, The Adventure of Tom Sawyer, The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, etc. By the first important American novelist (Pearson), Mark Twain. And as you read them, I bet you'd notice that Twain have a distinguish style of writing compare to all the author that you've known or read before. He is well-known for the use of his "irreverent, biting social satire, and realism of place and languages".

Twain's first writing was in 1862, when a popular newspaper in Virgina published an article with a "satirical" view about a local judge ('Samuel Langhorne Clemens'). The article, signed with the name "Josh" Immediately, the article caught many people's attention. Then from there his writing career really start. Clemens give himself a brand new pen name, so Mark Twain was born. In Nevada's territorial legislature as a reporter, he discover his humor and satire often get his point across very well. He made many impressions, that it was joked he had more influence on the legislation than the legislators themselves had ('Samuel Langhorne Clemens'). In Huckleberry Finn there are lots of slang, racist language, as well as the institution of slavery. Twain's portrayal of the runaway slave Jim has sometimes been condemned as superficial. That's why the book is criticized by the critics (Twain). Twain preferred to be known as a serious writer better than a humorist, however, it was his humor that brings the crowds and the money (Kelly).

The two books "Tom Sawyer", "The adventures of Huckleberry Finn," was Mark Twain's most accomplished work. Twain uses the rites of passage from childhood to adulthood to expose moral issues and inequality. Huckleberry Finn's main accomplice in the novel is the slave named Jim (Pearson). The narrative device of a raft carrying Huck and a runaway slave down the Mississippi allow Twain to reach a realistic portrait of American life in the 19Th century ("Mark Twain.")

Twain have a very distinguish style of writing, and best known for his use of his irreverent, biting social satire, and realism of place and languages. Twain use jokes and get his point across very well during his lectures.

writefluidity 1 / 2  
Apr 28, 2011   #2
There's many MANY grammar errors in the piece, I would not and this in until all the errors are corrected, because it doesn't make it very easy to read. Just my two cents. Work on your present and past tense. Also, reading the essay aloud to yourself will probably to help point out certain errors, for I can't search the whole essay and correct them all. Once they're corrected, you have a good piece. Except to remember, don't be repetitive. No need to repeat things that were already said. Good luck!
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Apr 28, 2011   #3
Hi Tom, sorry you did not get help in time. It's true... you have grammar errors! Spend some time reading a good book every night, and read some sentences aloud to learn good grammar habits:

If you're the type of person that loves to read, you probably won't miss beautiful pieces of literature, like...

He is well-known for the use of his "irreverent, biting social satire, and realism of place and languages" (add the author's name and page number).

Keep the tense consistent:Twain preferred to be known as a serious writer better than a humorist, however, it was his humor that brought the crowds and the money (Kelly).

Twain have had a very distinguish style of writing, and best known for his use of his irreverent, biting social satire, and realism of place and languages. Twain used jokes and get his point across very well during his lectures.

:-)


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