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It is only a matter of time before teachers are replaced by technology in the classroom.


harryhoangvn 1 / -  
Mar 22, 2018   #1

artficial intelligence is coming



There have been immense advances in technology in each and every field of human lives, especially in education. Over the last decade, the number of people taking online courses and therefore using technology as a tool to enhance their education has increased dramatically. Still, I am convinced that the crucial role of teachers in the classroom can not be eliminated.

Admittedly, modern education gain benefits from the process of applying technology advances in class. There are various intelligent software and huge amount of available information which enable people to grasp knowledge faster and in an easier way. For instance, within clicks, learners are able to approach their favourite subjects online through a wide range of helpful websites like Quizlet and Koofers.

However, the fundamental about teaching and studying remain the same and at the end, the teacher is the one imparting knowledge. Teachers are required in the learning process because they understand thoroughly students' difficulties and help them to solve their problems by explaining, giving extra exercises or even tutoring.

Furthermore, the teacher is one who is emotionally attached to his students. Children are taught not only about theory lessons but respecting others and social skills as well. A recent study of National University has shown that the rate of children's behavior are strongly influenced by teachers' methods doubled that of parents' ways which indicates the substancial contribution of instructors to adolescents'development.

In conclusion, the role of teachers in educational institutions is always vital and it will continue to be in the future because no machine can replace the human interaction.
Alao0702 8 / 14  
Mar 25, 2018   #2
Hello harry........I'd say you have a good essay, however you need to address some parts which do not support the theme of the essay. In essence your focus should be entirely on ways in which technology is replacing teachers in the classroom. You did talk about that in some parts of the essay, but then, you also talked about the indispensability of teachers in the classroom which, in my own opinion, does not flow with the theme.
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Mar 26, 2018   #3
Hoang, while you wrote a pretty good essay here. I am not going to applaud your work for accuracy or relevance. That is because you failed to present the original prompt for the discussion which was supposed to help me review your essay for the overall scoring requirements, specially in the Task Accuracy portion of the essay. That is why I do not believe that this work can be considered well written nor relevant to the topic. When you fail to give the contributors and the users here the instructions for the essay, you do not allow us to properly help you improve your problem points because we are unable to spot what the problems in your work are. What I can tell you with confidence though, is that all of your paragraph presentations remain little developed in terms of discussion and as such, will not get a full scoring consideration for the C&C section of the scoring. This will definitely limit your ability to be able to get a higher than average, if all, passing score for your work. Remember, post the complete prompt the next time you ask for a review so that you can receive more accurate reviews of your work.


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