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Misbehaviour of students at school


ammus1 10 / 29  
May 12, 2014   #1
Hai friends,please correct my essay ,thanks in advance

Ques:Today many schools face problems with misbehaviour of students.what are the main reasons behind it.What solutions can be taken.

Ans:Thesedays,many schools confront issues with misbehaviour of students.There are many reasons behind this situation.However,some remedies can be taken to overcome this menace.

The primary reason for such a behaviour of students at school is lack of love,care and support from the family.In most of the families,for example,both parents are working to meet their living expenses.Thus they do not get time to spend with their children at home which would adversely affect the behaviour of children. Another reason is freedom of children ,especially in western countries like UK,children have the right to take decisions and choices at their very early age compared to eastern cultures .Therefore ,the crime rate in western countries is higher than the eastern countries.Moreover,by watching violent programmes from television also affects the children's behaviour because they try to do those activities in their daily life.

Nevertheless,misdemeanour of students can be rectified to an extent.Firstly,parents are the first teachers of their children and they should spend more time with their children which would help the pupils to lead a better life.Also,teachers play a pivotal role in overall development of the children.So they should be strict and teach the children about the moral and social values along with academic subjects.Furthermore,governments can impose rules such as to check the children before they enter school in order to make sure that they are not carry any weapons to school.Thus they can avoid or decrease anti social activities of children to some extent.

To sum up,antisocial behaviour of students is one the major issue in our society.By taking necessary action it can be ward off and hopefully in the future children will develop a better behaviour.

Pahan 1 / 1,907 553  
May 12, 2014   #2
There are many reasons behind this situationproblem. However, there are some remedies remedial measures that can be takenemployed to overcome this menace.

In most of the families,for example ,both parents are working to meet their living expenses.

Another reason is freedom of children ,especially in western countries like UK,children have the right to take decisions and choices at their very early age compared to eastern cultures

.... this sentence would read better if it is not so lengthy.
OP ammus1 10 / 29  
May 12, 2014   #3
Thank you very much pahan for your corrections
dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
May 15, 2014   #4
Nevertheless,misdemeanour of students can be rectified to an extent.

Nevertheless, issues relating to bad behavior of students can be addressed to a great extent.

Firstly,parents are the first teachers of their children and they should spend more time with their children which would help the pupils to lead a better life.Also,teachers play a pivotal role in overall development of the children.

First, parents and teachers should play a great role in this regard. The parents need to spend more time with their children and help them with their emotional growth. The teachers too should develop a close connection with their students and guide them in the right path to success.


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