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The new finding - birds can avoid crashing in flight


BAMS14 18 / 29  
Sep 29, 2016   #1
WHY BIRD NEVER COLLIDE IN FLIGHT

The new finding, birds can avoid crahsing in flight, based on research they are have preference to veering right. In several observation with more sample birds who releas together in same time and same location, the result they are not collide each other. On the other hand they are flight different hight each others. Those behavior are duplicate to drone. The drone be equiped sensors to avoid hitting others object. In conclusion bird have unique behavior who can mantain each other in flight by coloni.
Yonathan 46 / 65 5  
Sep 29, 2016   #2
Hi Bams
Let me give you some advice...

The new finding, birds can avoid crahsing (crashing) in flight, based on research (...) sample birds who releas(realesed) together in same (...), the result they are(do) not collide each other.

... flight different hight (height) each others. Those behavior(behaviour) are duplicate to drone. The drone be equiped(equipped) sensors to avoid ...
... behavior who can mantain(maintain) each other in flight by coloni(colony).

1.Your summary is too short
2.Many misspell word

1.You must write at least 150 words
2. Make sure to double-checked your writing and search in dictionary
Thank you...
Alamsyah Ismail 24 / 43  
Sep 29, 2016   #3
Hello Bams14
There are some advice from me, attract your attention if you wish

birds can avoid crahsing in flight
.... crashing

they are have preference to veering right
.....to make to infinitive, have to combine between to and verb bare infinitive (veer)

sample birds who releas(ed) together in same time
.... who released
MFES2016 5 / 6 2  
Sep 29, 2016   #4
Hi Bam
I would like to note you some advises
hope it works

>> birds can avoid crahsingcrashing in flight
>> they are have ] havethe preference to veering right
>> who releasreleased together in the same time and same location
>> they are not collidedo not collide each other


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