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New Zealand experienced the biggest shift in the electric power source.



ifraanisa05 44 / 67  
Nov 20, 2016   #1
The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in New Zealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010.

A comparison of the information about source of electricity generation in Newzealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010 is depicted by the pie charts. Overall, the alteration of total sources in these countries was almost double in 2010. Nuclear power became the main source in Germany while Newzealand took coal as their main source.

To begin with, Newzealand experienced the biggest shift in the electric power source. In 2010, coal produced electricity twofold higher than 1980 which was about 56 units. Natural gas and petroleum source which were 30 and 11 units decreased at 2 units to each source. In contrast, hydro witnessed a slight rose from 30 to 46 units respectively in three decades

In 1980, the deployment of source used in Germany is almost equal, but in 2010, nuclear power gained the biggest units in the source of electric power. Nuclear power increased dramatically from 20 to 155 respectively whereas utilisation of natural gas and hydro which were 28 and 7 went down at 2. When coal did not experience the changing, petroleum rose slightly by 5 units


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ichanpants89 16 / 742  
Nov 20, 2016   #2
Annisa,
Here's my analysis towards your report summary of IELTS Task 1. I hope you can follow through.

- ...Germany inbetween 1980 and 2010 is depicted byin the pie charts.
- Overall, it can be seen that the alteration of total sources in thesethose countries was almost doubled in 2010.
- Nuclear power became the main electricity generation source in Germany while NewzealandNew Zealand took C oal as theiritsmainprimary source.

- To begin with, NewzealandNew Zealand experienced...
- ... twofold higher than 1980 which was aboutat approximately 56 units.
- ... and 11 units decreased atby 2 units tofor each source.
- ... rose from 30 to 46 units respectively in three decades.

Hope this helps :)


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