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IELTS - old buildings should be preserved; 'contribute to our sense of culture'



hieptv 1 / 1  
Jul 27, 2013   #1
TOPIC: Some people argue that there is no point in persevering old buildings when land is so valuable in our cities. Others believe that old buildings are important part of our heritage and should be preserved

Discuss both these views and state your opinion.


The preservation of old buildings always is a large question for governments because conflict between the issues of housing for citizens and the protection of our culture. In my opinion, all of the old building which contribute to our sense of culture should be conserved.

There are different reasons which persuade that people should not restore old buildings. As a result of the rapid urbanization process, in which rural people must go to urban centers to look for job opportunities, the question of the preservation of old buildings has become more pressing. Because of that need, governments can construct more accommodation instead of preserving old buildings. Besides that, the preservation is very expensive because all components of old buildings have historical values.

Old buildings are an essential part of history. Tourist often decide to discover the culture of a country when they visit through those old buildings. Therefore, managers of cities can earn more money from the attraction provided by old buildings and that amount can be spent on their conservation. Furthermore, the preservation of old buildings is also a ways to conserve our culture and everyone can learn much from them. Old buildings should be used as the culture museums and provide accommodation with more convenient for people who live there. . Many cities have development strategies as a city contains both unique and modern beauty, and that preservation help to finish half of work.

Overall, both of those view have strong arguments: the need for housing or the expense of restoration contrast with our desire to conserve culture and attract tourism. So I think we should restore those building because old buildings process the most outstanding feature of areas which contain them.

bobinv 5 / 13  
Jul 27, 2013   #2
in which rural people must go to urban centers to look for job opportunities

in which rural people have to move to urban centers...

can construct more accommodation

provide more accomodation

managers of cities

I didnt quite get this.. managers of cities?

provide accommodation with more convenient for people who live there

Please try to rephrase this sentence.

Hope i was helpful
yucky 6 / 8  
Jul 27, 2013   #3
Hi Hieptv!

-The preservation of old buildings always is a large (is always a large ) question for governments because(of the ) conflict between the issues of housing for citizens and the protection of our culture.

-Because of that need, governments can (should ) construct more accommodation instead of preserving old buildings.
-the preservation is very expensive because all components of old buildings have historical values. What did you mean by this?
-Old buildings should be used as the culture museums and provide accommodation with more convenient for people who live there. This either, I couldn't find it relevant.

-So I think we should restore those building because old buildings process (present )the most outstanding feature of areas which contain them.
Hope those willl help!
dumi 1 / 6793  
Jul 28, 2013   #4
large question

.... "major concern"

The preservation of old buildings always is a large question for governments because conflict between the issues of housing for citizens and the protection of our culture.

Begin your introduction with a hook;
Old buildings speak of a nation's heritage.
Also, why do you narrow down your topic to housing issue? Such land could be used for commercial purposes too. Always keep a proper alignment with your topic.
OP hieptv 1 / 1  
Jul 28, 2013   #5
yucky
Thanks for your feedback
"the preservation is very expensive because all components of old buildings have historical values"

I want to mention problem of preservation cost. Old buildings were built many years ago, so we have to spend a large amount of money on finding and repairing culture components

"Old buildings should be used as the culture museums and provide accommodation with more convenient for people who live there"
it's a way to preserve old buildings and that also solve the issues of housing of people who are living in those building


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