Topic: Successful professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion
This is the third paragraph: However, I would agree with those who believe we should support more for the working of other crucial such as education or health,..The main reason for this argument is that I think there are many vital fields which relate to our social more directly than sport. It means that the development of degradation of it have a ( i don't know what adj i should add) influence on our life. Education, for instance should be investigated and concentrated on for the stable improvement of the nation. Another argument is because of the silent contribution of many people who are working for the better world. Hence, we should be grateful to them and support more for their working
This is the third paragraph: However, I would agree with those who believe we should support more for the working of other crucial such as education or health,..The main reason for this argument is that I think there are many vital fields which relate to our social more directly than sport. It means that the development of degradation of it have a ( i don't know what adj i should add) influence on our life. Education, for instance should be investigated and concentrated on for the stable improvement of the nation. Another argument is because of the silent contribution of many people who are working for the better world. Hence, we should be grateful to them and support more for their working