theme: "People are living longer than ever before. At the same time the young population is declining while the number of old people is rising. Will this development be a benefit for society? What are the advantages and disadvantages of having more old people in the country?"
In our days there is seen a tragedical trend with declining of young population, meanwhile the number of older people is going up. Some people wonder if it will be a benefit for our society. So do I, and lower I'm about to explain my ideas.
On the one hand, large number of senior generation means that medecine is developing day by day. More medicals are being invented, more people's lives are being saved. Rate of people dying because of deadly illnesses is decreasing , and it has, of course, only positive effects on our society.
On the other hand , decreasing of young people's number is very harmful for our community. Because of boundless attitudes of youngs to their lives {IS IT RIGHT?} , more and more of them die in accidents or because of taking drugs. But young population today is old generation tomorrow, so it's possible to predict {i couldn't do it with other words!} that in near future populace of our globe will be less than today (or is it more effective use word "now"?) Having less population may decrease the level of our economy, which is very sensitive to any changes, happening in our world. It's also vital to note that decreasing of economy's level may make it harder to live by growing of costs and decreasing of salaries...
From my point of view, the main advantage of having more old people is that youngers can learn on mistakes of their predecessors and try to make the world better than it was before. But it comes as an acute problem to understand whether youngs would do it or not. Concerning disatvantages , excluding the possible problem of economy that I've explained higher (before?), I'd mention that elders may be obstacles of developing new, modern culture which, in turn, is step to the new world order.
Summing it up, I want to say that this trend has goods , which are the same as bad sides.
/* I absolutely don't like this essay. What can I change in it? When I read it , I feel like something is wrong in it, I don't mean grammatical errors ! */
In our days there is seen a tragedical trend with declining of young population, meanwhile the number of older people is going up. Some people wonder if it will be a benefit for our society. So do I, and lower I'm about to explain my ideas.
On the one hand, large number of senior generation means that medecine is developing day by day. More medicals are being invented, more people's lives are being saved. Rate of people dying because of deadly illnesses is decreasing , and it has, of course, only positive effects on our society.
On the other hand , decreasing of young people's number is very harmful for our community. Because of boundless attitudes of youngs to their lives {IS IT RIGHT?} , more and more of them die in accidents or because of taking drugs. But young population today is old generation tomorrow, so it's possible to predict {i couldn't do it with other words!} that in near future populace of our globe will be less than today (or is it more effective use word "now"?) Having less population may decrease the level of our economy, which is very sensitive to any changes, happening in our world. It's also vital to note that decreasing of economy's level may make it harder to live by growing of costs and decreasing of salaries...
From my point of view, the main advantage of having more old people is that youngers can learn on mistakes of their predecessors and try to make the world better than it was before. But it comes as an acute problem to understand whether youngs would do it or not. Concerning disatvantages , excluding the possible problem of economy that I've explained higher (before?), I'd mention that elders may be obstacles of developing new, modern culture which, in turn, is step to the new world order.
Summing it up, I want to say that this trend has goods , which are the same as bad sides.
/* I absolutely don't like this essay. What can I change in it? When I read it , I feel like something is wrong in it, I don't mean grammatical errors ! */