Parkinson's disease may start in the gut and travel to the brain
Previously, people think that Parkison's disease is caused by brain cell damage, and these day it is predicted that it come from gut. This disease is one of sort deadly diseases. Eventhough, it can be prevent by some medicine, the influence of this disease can kill neutron within brain.
Thank to turn out of research that use mice as animal experiments, this disease is caused by unique bacteria in gun that maybe come from misconception medicine or influences of pesticides for farmers who use it . These bacteria are named synuclein which are able to travel to brain. If people can identify first location of this disease, patients can be saved by injecting certain medicines or antibiotics.
Hi Pramudia27,
..., and these days it is predicted that ...
This disease is one of sortshort deadly diseases. Eventhough,Even though(no comma) it can be prevented by some medicine,...
Thank to turn out of research that ... ,Thanks to the research of using mice as animal experiments, this disease is caused by unique bacteria in the gun that ...
If people can identify the first location of ...
Hi, Pram here is my thoughts
thesethis day it is predicted that ...
it can be preventprevented by some medicine
... out of research that useuses mice as animal experiments,
... named synuclein which areis able to travel to brain.
Pram, by reading your summary, i know that you have a problem in subject-verb agreement.
I believe that you already understand the theory, but maybe you are in a rush so that you created many mistakes
please read your essay and pay attention to subject-verb agreement before you upload it.
Hello Pram, I will give my correction for you
these daydays("these" indicate plural, so you must use "days")
Eventhougheven though(this is the right write of even though)
it can be preventprevented by some medicine (passive voice is tobe + verb participle)
Thank to turn out of research that useuses mice as animal experiments (the subject is singular, so you must use singular verb too)
These bacteria are named synuclein which are is able to travel (the subject before "which" is "synuclein" and it is singular subject)
thank you
