tyar32, you are not allowed to post two writings in one thread. Stop doing this, otherwise, your account will get banned. Bear in mind!
When it comes to writing task 1, it is always good to include the picture of the graph. This helps readers understand what is being asked in the graph.
The bar chats give information about participation levels in science and education depens developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990
A breakdown of participation levels in science and education as per developing and industrialized countries is presented in the bar chart. The data is taken from 1980 to 1990, a 10-year period.
Some conditions happen in participation of scientist and technicians, they was higher than developing countries in both years.
this contains a grammatically incorrect sentence as two main sentences run together. How to solve this? You need to break it two or three sentences.
Hope this helps :D