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People always leave



jehona 1 / -  
Jul 13, 2012   #1
People always leave. I divide them into three categories: the ones who leave and you forget about them, the ones who leave and it takes time to forget them, and the ones you can never forget. Today I am writing for a person who came into my life and made a huge imprint on me and walked away. Everyday I get up and...I can't lie it feels like every other day mentally and physically. But every time something happens maybe the littelest change, I feel emotionally drained. Like he took a part of me and now I am hollow. I think I am pretty good at hiding it but sometimes I feel that people can see through me just walk into me.What he took away now it cannot come back.We used to be apart only by a few steps or words but now we are apart by time and distance. Maybe a year back I wished we could just be together but now I see that not only it will be a bad idea for both of us but that I am scared to be with the one I love because I am afraid that losing him again may hurt me so bad that I will not have the power to get over it. Maybe in another life in another time in another circumstance we would be two hearts beating as one...

terencetufuor 1 / 3  
Jul 13, 2012   #2
Look sometimes in this world you are living you have to just let go if something is noloonger important to you for example lets say you hear this new song in just a few weeks a new song will come which will be better than the other one . So do not hold such things in your heart sometimes it is just good to let go even though sometimes is painful get agroup of friends, games or just a short break in life and look around the world to really see what life is about.


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