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Most People are missing out on incredible opportunities all of the time, making bad decisions



eve01 24 / 21  
Sep 26, 2016   #1
SUMMARY TED : Programming your mind for being success

Carrie Green began her speech with giving one question to the audiences, can i have a volunteer to stand with me on this stage?. After a couple of minutes someone joined her and she just wanted to test and give money to audiences but this was not about the money, it was about experiment demonstrates the power of your mind. The fact that what is going on up in your head has such a huge impact on the actions that you take, on the decisions you make, and the things that you experience.

According to Carrie Green, The reasons why people think twice to stand on this stage are because of fear, obstacles and less motivation. First reason, Fear of standing up stage in front of nearly 1000 people is really damn scary, perhaps it was fear of the unknown, because they had no idea what should do with the speaker. Furthermore, the second reason, it was because of OBSTACLES. There were quite a lot of obstacles in this room, probably they are so far at the back, and they just thought there are lots of tables in their way up it's too difficult to reach stage. Third reason, it's just the lack of MOTIVATION. Perhaps they just could not be bothered to move and come up to the stage But no matter what they reason were, their decision started up here on the stage, In their mind.

Most People are missing out on incredible opportunities all of the time, because of what's going on in the head, making bad decisions. However, people who believe with Those kind of self-limiting thoughts And so these wonderful ideas, incredible potentials, stay locked up inside will create a wonderful life And that is exactly what was happening to Carrie a few years ago.

source: youtube.com/watch?v=MmfikLimeQ8

Giansy11 18 / 30  
Sep 26, 2016   #2
Hii Eve..
it is clearly summary, i only want to give some suggestions.

1. carefully with the capital latter in the middle of sentence
. According to Carrie Green, T he reasons why people ...
. First reason, F ear of
. Most P eople are missing out on ...
. However, people who believe with T hose kind of self-limiting
. thoughts A nd so these wonderful ideas,
. ... create a wonderful life A nd that is exactly


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