People have a tendency to store knowledge on the internet at the present time

In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays, people store knowledge on the internet.

Are there more advantages or disadvantages of this trend.

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People have a tendency to store knowledge on the internet at the present while they used books to store knowledge in the past. Personally, I believe that the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks.

In my opinion, the only disadvantage of storing information on the internet is that it increases the screen time, resulting in impact badly on our eye health. However, this problem can be solved by using the anti-bluelight glasses or we can use the anti-bluelight screen protector for our devices when we use the advanced technology such as smartphones, tablets, computers and so on to get the knowledge online and those things can be easily bought in every regions.

By contrast, using the internet to store knowledge has many advantages. Firstly, qualified information on the internet is convenient to access as we can just stay at home to reach the knowledge online by some clicks or taps on our fingers; meanwhile, we have to buy books when the knowledge is stored in them that we may go to bookstores to buy them or shop them online, but the books may be damaged in the delivery journey. For instance, I bought a photobook on the Amazon website delivered from the United States. When I received it, the border and corners of the photobook were completely spoiled by external causes when it was being delivered. In addition, the quality of knowledge can be maintained all the time while the word in books can be faded in the long run.

In conclusion, I think storing knowledge on the internet has more advantages than the disadvantages that it brings.

Excellent work in making it very clear to the examiner that you are stating your personal opinion throughout the essay. By using the correct pronouns, you will certainly increase your scores across all considerations, specially in the C+C and GRA sections. However, you should not have discussed the disadvantage in the essay. The idea is to prove that your opinion (advantage) is the correct one. So the discussion format should have been:

Sentence 1: Perceived disadvantage
Sentence 2: Reason it is seen as a disadvantage
Sentence 3: Why it is an advantage
Sentence 4: Give a supporting example
Sentence 5: (optional) Additional connected supporting explanation

You cannot prove that your idea should be listened to and believed by the examiner when you are trying to prove and disprove both sides. The job of the writer is to ensure that he always disproves the side opposing his own opinion. High scores are sure to follow if the writer can accomplish that.