The percentage of Bulgarians who were expecting to live abroad, based on their education

The bar chart shows the percentage of Bulgarians who were expecting to live in foreign countries, based on three level of education, higher education, secondary and primary or lower education, over a three-year period.

Turning on the details, senior high school is one of group of the highest education step in Bulgaria each year but it fell slowly in the end of the period from 65 percent in 2002 to 59 percent in 2008. On the other side, the second higher level of Bulgarians is junior high school or elementary school which increased slightly from 18 percent in 2002 to 32 percent in 2008. However, the percentage between 2006 and 2002 which showed a significant rise was only from 18 percent to 19 percent.

Furthermore, the categories of Bulgarians who had tertiary education fell down at 9 percent in 2008 from 20 percent in the previous period. It is shown that well educated Bulgarians people were lower interest to live and move to another country than primary school people.

To sum up, over the last six years, education was not the first aim of Bulgarian to move to another country which has illustrate the worst request based on the type of Bulgarian education. There might be other reasons for living in different countries.

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Hi Eva.
Let me help you to finalize your writing. In this moment, I only concentrate to your contents of this writing. Please, meet my notes and deal with them.

Miss Eva, you should make a paragraph consisting of at least three sentences to be the good paragraph. Because of that, you are supposed to include overview in the first paragraph. Actually, I know that you placed the overview in the last paragraph. However, you create it like a conclusion. Keep in your mind that the writing task 1 does not have the conclusion because you cannot attach your opinion in description of the data. You only can write the summary of the information which is well-known as the overview.

I offer the example of overview.
OVERALL, IT IS IMPORTANT TO NOTE THAT MOST OF BULGARIANS' CITIZENS HAD THE PLAN TO STAY IN ANOTHER COUNTRY AFTER THEY FINISH THE EDUCATION IN A SECONDARY SCHOOL. MOREOVER, IN THE TIMEFRAME, THE NUMBER OF CITIZENS IN BULGARIAN HAVING PASSED THE PRIMARY AND LOWER SCHOOL HAD INCREASED SIGNIFICANTLY IN THE SAME CIRCUMSTANCE WHILE THE FIGURE OF THE SECONDARY EDUCATION HAD SHOWN THE REVERSE TREN.

Hopefully, those can help you.
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