The percentage of kinds of transport used and the reasoning behind the use of a vehicle in Edmonton

IELTS Task 1 (Practice) - The Transport and Car Use in Edmonton

The given chart shows the information on the percentage of kinds of transport used, and the table indicates the reasoning behind the use of car in the city by people who lives in Edmonton. Overall, it can be seen that car becomes the most favorable transport used by people in Edmonton. Why do they love to use car the most? The mobility of car to work comes up as the reason with biggest proportion for them.

By a closer look to the chart, it is noticeable that car, as the only private transportation, by far nearly dominates the preference of transport used by Edmonton people with 45%. While, the rest 55% are shared by three public transports. LRT follows in the second place with 35%, and another 20% fairly distributed to Bus and Taxi by 10% respectively.

Moreover, according to the table, 55% of people in Edmonton prefer to use car because it commutes to work. Other reasons that also have big proportion are for business and taking kids to school with 45% and 40%. However, shopping and leisure activity that shares similar proportions of 15% each become the least popular reasons for Edmonton people.

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Hy Febry,

You can use the others form of proportion, such as fraction, qualifier, and majority/minority
15% --> a minority
20% --> a fifth
45% --> more than two fifths
55% --> just above a half

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