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The percentage of U.K. university students in England who were capable to speak different languages



louislo1006 1 / 1  
Nov 26, 2017   #1

speaking two languages in the uk



The pie charts illustrate the percentage of the U.K. students at an university in England who were capable to speak languages other than English for both 2000 and 2010.

It it clear to observe that Spanish is the most popular language, in addition to English , for both 2000 and 2010, although the chart sees a slightly decrease in the percentage in Spanish.

In 2000, German accounts for the fewest percentage of British students able to speak. This percentage remains the same for 2010, making German become the only language that is still the most unfamiliar with British students.

On the other hand, British students in 2010 who are able to speak two languages other than English increase 5%,from 10% to 15%, compared with 2000. This phenomenon shrinks the percentage of languages spoken in French and those who can not speak other languages.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15466  
Nov 26, 2017   #2
Louis, even without the chart included in this essay. I can authoritatively tell you that you will get a failing score for this essay because you wrote less than the required 150 words. You only wrote 142 words, which means that accurate scoring considerations cannot be made for your essay. It fails on all 4 scoring points because your discussion is not accurately developed nor informative for the reader. Had you provided a sample of the illustration, which is a requirement at this forum for any student who wants a Task 1 essay review, I would have been able to show you how to improve upon this essay. Unfortunately, you did not upload it so I have to stop with this general review, that is highly accurate since you did not pass the test on the word count criteria alone.
OP louislo1006 1 / 1  
Nov 26, 2017   #3
@Holt
Thank you for the feedback!!! I just begin to learn about IELTS.


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