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Popular image of Hawaii that always relates to hula dancing with women swaying their hips



rizaldohabibie 19 / 34  
Sep 21, 2016   #1
IELST writing summary: Hula Dancing in Hawaiian Culture

Popular illustration about Hawaii that always relates to the hula dancing with women in grass swaying their hips and wearing skirt is a general stereotype in which this authentically has its roots of tradition.

This dance actually relates to the cultural ritual in honour of gods presented in front of altar and it is performed by both women and men. Hula, in its history, was discouraged as James Cook visited the islands causing numerous changes in the Hawaiian society until King David Kalakua revived the dance during his reign afterwards. Furthermore, a Hawaiian cultural festival prominent as The Merrie Monarch is held annually which differentiates the type of hula dance into ancient style -hula kahiko- and modern hula -hula auana-. Traditional hula tends to be energetic with accompaniment of chants and drum beats then modern style is quite similar to the ancient hula but it is slower and more graceful escorted with guitar and ukulele music.

This dance has become a form of entertainment after it was once religious ritual. In fact, it has fascinated vast people including tourists and native Hawaiians living outside the homeland.

bismillah 15 / 27  
Sep 21, 2016   #2
hi rizaldo i give some advices on your essay such as spelling of word, and
others
visiting = visitting
Merrie Monarch is held annually which differentiates thedifferent type of hula dance
Hula tradional tends to be energetic with accompaniment of chants
or you can use like this tradional of hula.
please pay more attention about ,grammatical error ,spelling of the word,and also functuation. it will make better essay of yours i
i hope that will help you
OP rizaldohabibie 19 / 34  
Sep 21, 2016   #3
Thank you for the correction.
I want to discuss it with you.

>>is a general stereotypein which this authentically has its roots of tradition.
I intend to explain hula dancing has roots of tradition that I illustrate in the body paragraph.

as your point of view, how is the good structure to deliver my thought?
TJLuschen - / 236  
Sep 21, 2016   #4
Hi, thanks for getting back to me. I would suggest this replacement sentence:

The popular image of Hawaii that prominently features women swaying their hips and wearing grass skirts is a general stereotype, but hula dancing itself has its roots in authentic traditions.


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