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Why should we prefer English language over other language?



sharmajali 5 / 14  
May 8, 2013   #1
Why should we prefer English language over other language?

Language is the highly developed form of communication and is one of the distinguished characteristics of a human being over animals. It has been developed over years and every country has its own. But as the interaction between nations increased so as the necessity for a common language emerged, and as a result English language got its priority.

Another reason for its fame is because of the British invasion over various countries has blessed them with the opportunity to learn it. Though it considered just as a secondary language it got its fire power by the progress of globalization.

Education was the first to be struck by its stardom. English got its easy grip over the curriculum and its significance up surged over years. This change took place because of the ingenious efforts done in the field of science and technology, and the major contributors were English prominent countries. Text books, journals, research papers were all published In English, which also forced students to excel in it.

Professional front is another area which is completely swept away by this revolutionary change. Despite of mother tongue, English is included as official language. One reason is because of the economic growth is highly weight by the interaction with other developed nation either through politics or job. Up surging BPO, MNC, International Hospital and Hotel are the product of it.

However, I will never abate the learning of other language because it has a crucial role in keeping cultural milieu alive. But in question of giving priority to English language, I have no second thought about it.

homsai 11 / 21  
May 8, 2013   #2
as a result English languagegot gets its priority

I believe present tense here would be better

because of

I am personally think it should be "because", because you follow it by a clause rather than a noun.

Text books

Textbooks

other languages

I found it was hard to follow your ideas, but it might be caused by you had a wider range vocabulary than me.

And I personally don't think it is a good idea to use past tense in most of your essay.

Wish you have good luck.
OP sharmajali 5 / 14  
May 8, 2013   #3
Thanks Homsai for your response and suggestions. :)
querysolution - / 1  
May 8, 2013   #4
British ruled many countries and they had been dominated and so mostly countries prefer english as british have impression on most of the part of the country
BachChaconne2 1 / 94  
May 8, 2013   #5
The question is, "Why should we prefer English language over other language?" In your essay, you justify English as a global language, but you do not argue why it should be preferred.

On another note, you could refine the paragraphs you have now. Indeed, you're off to a good start. Keep going!

Miscellaneous comments:

Why is English considered to be a "secondary language"? Who considers it to be a "secondary language"?
dumi 1 / 6793  
May 8, 2013   #6
Language is the highly developed form of communication and is one of the distinguished characteristics of a human being over animals.

.... animals too have their own forms of communication that are close to languages.
Human languages are a very advance form of communication and this feature also distinguishes humans from other animals.

It has been developed over years and every country has its own.

A language take a longer period to develop and it is subject to continuous change with time. Almost every nation, tribe, community have their own languages or at least dialects.

I think you have missed out an important point here. Language is a combination of speaking, writing, reading and listening.
OP sharmajali 5 / 14  
May 10, 2013   #7
Will keep these points in mind when i do the rewrite.


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