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Do you prefer traditional house or live in apartment?


saeed_s_1368 1 / -  
Apr 11, 2013   #1
Every one needs a shelter and safety there and depends on the economical condition of person or it's the tact of person's to choose owns houses.

Some people like to live in apartment because most of the apartments are in big cities.Absolutely big cities have more facilities toward small cities or village and some people like to live in pent house or skyscraper buildings.

Despite some people like living in small city or village and prefer to live in specific place and unpolluted air.Actually some person don't like polluted and crowd city and want to live in nature.

In traditional houses people can take pets very easily but in apartment we can't,and if we have pet in apartment maybe they annoy the neighbors.

In my idea both of them are god for living and have some advantage and disadvantages.I my self choose living in a traditional house because I grew up in traditional house and it reminds me some red letter days.

stu6940 1 / 1 1  
Apr 11, 2013   #2
Well, keeping the present scenario in mind, where each and every person is heading towards development and betterment, you've got to accept living in apartments. Cities provide a LOT of advantages which attract us, obviously; Like You can't expect a lavish hotel or an international school close to your traditional houses.

Nevertheless, our tradition is the most beautiful gift left for us by our ancestors. And one should experience living in traditional houses. So I would say, for living purpose on a daily basic needs, apartments. And traditional houses in holidays as a holiday destination to relax and enjoy the tradition.
gospellover 2 / 3  
Apr 11, 2013   #3
Despite some people like living in small city or village and prefer to live in specific place and unpolluted air. Actually some person don't like polluted and crowd city and want to live in nature.

- While some like living in a small city or village and prefer to live in unpolluted air, others don't like air pollution and want to live in nature rather than crowded city
dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Apr 12, 2013   #4
Every one needs a shelter and safetythere and depends on the economical condition of person or it's the tact of person's to choose owns houses.

... this is not a very catchy sentence to open an essay. The sentence would be more effective if you shorten it;
Everyone needs a shelter that provides them with security, ambiance and comfort. After all one should feel happy and contented at home than in any other place in the world. However, depending on one's financial capabilities, personal attitudes, tastes, commitments and requirements people opt to choose to live in either traditional houses or apartment complexes.

Are you preparing for TOEFL or IELTS? If that is so, this essay needs lots of improvement regarding its structure.


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