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IELTS:The process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.


Eva Novita Sari 47 / 71 2  
Apr 19, 2014   #1
The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Answer:
The diagram shows process are made bricks for the building industry.

Generally, there are through seven points, beginning with the digging up of clay and culminating in delivery.

Firstly, digger is operated for taking clay. This clay is then placed onto a metal grid to be filtered a small part from clay and sieved with using roller for choosing the clay good quality. Following this, clay are involved with sand and water and this mixture is formed with using mould or using a wire cutter.

Secondly, following this, bricks are dried by oven during 24-48 hours. Next, it is placed into kiln with moderate approximately 2000 C - 9800 C. Then, bricks are moved to high temperature among 8700 C - 13000 C. Cooling process, bricks are cooled with using chamber during 48 - 72 hours. Next, bricks are packaged and it is ready to be delivered to consumer.

Overall, process are making bricks which needed long time for resulting good quality.




ernhy 17 / 28  
Apr 21, 2014   #2
Hy say... in writing task 1 you must write about 150 word. So, you should make sure the total of word :)
dumi 1 / 6,927 1592  
Apr 21, 2014   #3
The diagram shows process are made bricks for the building industry.
Generally, there are through seven points, beginning with the digging up of clay and culminating in delivery.

... you need to pay lots of attention to your grammar. It would be a big hurdle for you to earn a decent score if you don't improve on grammar;

The diagram shows the process of manufacturing bricks for the building industry.
Overall, there are seven stages in the process. The first stage is digging up clay.


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