The bar chart shows changes in the proportion of part-time employees in four countries of the UK between 1980 and 2010.
Overall, while England, Scotland and Wales experienced an increase in the rate of people who worked part-time, the opposite was true for Northern Ireland. Wales was the country where the percentage of part-time workers was highest in both eras.
In 1980, around 32% of employees in Wales worked part-time, which was about 8% higher than the figure for England. After 30 years, the former rose by about 3 percent, while the latter saw a greater increase of 6 percent. However, the overall percentage of workers in 2010 still appears to be higher in Wales.
The rate of people who worked as part-time employees in Northern Ireland in 1980 was around one quarter, but this figure declined by 2% in 2010. Of the four countries, the proportion of people working part-time was lowest in Scotland in 1980, at about 10%. This figure nearly doubled in 2010, making Ireland rank third in terms of part-time employment rate compared to other UK countries.
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4859 The summary overview is too short to be an acceptable analytical statement. You need to have at least 3 sentences in that paragraph. So you have to do a better job of reviewing the image or, you could include your trending statement in the paragraph. That way you have a solid summary overview inclusive of a trending reference.
Each paragraph clearly reports on the provided information with an impressive variation of the image references. It is effective and serves the purpose of reporting on the information that was provided for analysis and reporting. The examiner would appreciate and provide you with a better score if you actually try to add more analysis to your reference paragraphs. This is acceptable and will receive a low, but passing score. You should aim to improve your analysis with your next practice essay.